■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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When it comes to the person who is the best teacher, I will assert that parents are the best teachers. Although someone argues the person who is the best teacher such as friends, brother or sister, as I’m concerned, parents are the best teachers for these reasons: They have many experience and the sense of remembering methods whenever I talk to them.
First of all, they have the experience when I have in a trouble. It is easy for them to treat lots of problems because they might have in a trouble like me before. If I have in a trouble, I can always talk to them. For example, when I was a 7 years old, I’m so concerned about go to school everyday. I ask parents to decrease the fear of it. What surprise me is that they also are afraid of it in time they are young. They can make sure it for me that it was not the fear but the enjoyment. So, I can go to school everyday without the fear.
Not only that, they have a great sense of remembering methods. It is good for me to understand the questions easily, too. To illustrate, when I didn’t know how I can remember lots of the periodic table of elements in studying the science subject, they can give the tips of remembering method to me. It is only remembering the first word of elements. For example, hydrogen is h, oxygen is o and helium is he. It is very fun and become memorable for me. It is a story, revealing that parents are the best teachers.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the above statement because we can achieve solves and remembering methods from many experiences. In this respect, there is no doubt that parents are the best teachers. | |
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