It seems that receiving many advice will help one to learn about many things including life. However, I do not agree with the previous statement 무슨 statement인지 명시해주시는게 좋습니다. for the following two reasons: too much advice can make one confused. Also, people should learn about life and built one by themselves. also people should learn about life and build one by themselves.
To begin with, too much advice and meddling will confuse one to learn about life. 너무 뒤에 많이 덧붙이는 것보다 간결한게 좋을때가 있습니다. someone. There is an old saying, ‘Too many cooks spoil the broth.’ Even before receiving the tons of advice, one is already cofused and curious about life. Since each person has different opinions about life, it is impossible to compromise all of them. For example, when I was in high school, I was torn between studying math and studying art. Everyone around me had their own opinions and when they gave me their advice, it was not that helpful. 왜 그런지 더 설명하면 좋을듯. Actually, I was overwhelmed by them and confused even more. .Eventually, after much thoughts, I made the decision to study math 필요없음.
In addition, one should build their own ideas of life. One’s life cannot be built by others. Moreover, there is no accurate answer to the question: what is life? It is permanent question to all human beings and one should find the answer by his or her own. himself or herself. To illustrate, in my college years, one of philosophy professor assigned a homework. Students were supposed to find an answer of ‘what is the most important factor in life? - Happiness, health and money etc.’ Everyone had different values in their mind. It cannot be unified. At that time, I realized that everybody has their own conviction of life and it cannot be defined. 억지로 build their own idea라고 끌어가려고는 하지만
결국엔 이부분이 문단의 주제인듯하네요. 전체적인 테마를 철학적으로 잡은다음에
어떤 advice든 삶을 define할 수 없다. 라는 내용으로 전개를 해나갔다면 이 얘기가 괜찮았겠지만
전체적인 내용이 친구들의 advice는 필요없다는 주제인데 하나의 근거 삶의 목적얘기를 담은 것은 off-topic인것 같네요.
To conclude, to learn about life with the help of other people is impossible. First, too much opinions by individuals will make one even more confused. Furthermore, everybody has different ideas of life and it cannot be defined. One should acquire what life is by oneself. |