■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Your Answer :
Some people believe that games can teach us valuable lessons about life. In some aspect of that, it is plausible somewhat. However, to look more closer, it is a time-cousumming and waste energy way. I firmly support that idea. Here are some reasons why I do think like that.
To begin with, a munber of young people think that games are effective way to relieve stress. However, it gives negative influence on them actually. These days we are able to find out a substantial number of students stuck in PC room here and there. In there, tighted air and smok with flashing monitor screen can cause studnets' healthy problems. It will be fatal if they seat without any movement in the long run. From my friend experience, she sometimes played computer game in funny. As accumulated day to play games is more and more frequently, she became addicted to it. While other students was studying in class, she often didn't catch up other studnets and distract from school works. Due to the fact that she really wanted to quit plying game, she got more stress before. In retrospet, she regret wasing that valuable time flew away.
On top of that, game is just an entertainment in that moment. It is not prductive. Rather than playing games alone, hanging around with friends is more wise option. It can recharge your energy, refresh yourself, and relieve stress from a heavy load of school works. When you loose in playing game, it can cause you to irritable mind and of course, get more stress. Then, you have to play games more and more until you win. Apparently, it is waste of time and energy. As a studnet, the games are attrative things to distract from routine life, but it can cause fatal results.
To summarize, I believe that playing game is just a commercial attration to people. Sometimes, we are able to play game a little, but we have not to fall into it. | |
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