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Growing up, I often heard from my parents that I should neat clean my room, lest I live an will live unsuccesful life. I am sure that many people have similar experiences. However, I realize that my parents was wrong.; this being the case, I also want to argue that there are no relevance between success and organized organizing their own rooms. First, neat0ng and organizing the room is no more than a habit. In addition, people whose who do not organize and neat their room might be have more superior to other abilities.
To start, good organizing their room is just a habit. At first glance, It may seems that there are more incentive to people whose who is good at organizing their room. However, it is a widely accepted view that organizing is not no more than a good habit; I agree with this view from personal experience. For example, my second year of college comes to mind. In that year, I have a friend who has a habit that of organizing her room. Although my friend had a good habit, she suffered from getting a job and making other friends. Therefore, organizing and neating their room is no more than a habit and it doesn't affect their success.
In addition, people whose have not neat who don't clean their room might be have other great abilities or habits, not organizing. It cannot be said that every people whose who have dirty room are more smart and valuable than people whose who are not. However, what is true is that all of the people have a lot of abilities respectively. For example, I have read an article about survey of the Korean Times. In the survey, people, whose who lives successful life, were asked what the habit is good for your success. Of those who answered, 86% of people said that writing something everytime and everywhere is the key. When asked to explain, they stated that when they was were young, they were organized their room, but it doesn't wasn't relevant to their success. This example demonstrates that people whose rooms are organized and neat are not always successful.
To conclude, people whose rooms are organized and neat are thought of as living successful lives than people whose who are not. However, I want to argue that there are no relevance between organized room and success. Not only just a habit, but also people have a lot of other abilities while even they don't organize their room.
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