Topic : Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? |
It is commonly able to be seen that famous athletes and entertainer make a contract with high salaries up to millions of dollars. When it comes to their wages, some people agrees that they deserve such high salaries. In contrast, others don’t appove of their wages. In my point of view, I am totally on the formal side because of the fallowing reasons. In this paper, I will describe details and example to support my opinion. First of all, because famous athletes and entertainers offer us energy to our lives, they deserve to get high-paying salary. That is, people stress out through watching matches of athletes or programs of entertainers. In other words, people consider the high salary as compansation about their daily relief. I will take an example myself when I was studying day and night in the high school. I was under heavy pressure that I have to get into a prestigious university and got a lot of stresses from study. However, I used to relax and refresh whenever I watched TV programs which I could see my favorite entertainer. Therefore, famous athletes and entertainers deserve to get high salaries because they give us quite a lot pleasure. Secondly, people should not blame on famous athletes and entertainers with high salaries because it needs countless efforts to be famous celebrities. For instance, I keen on one entertainer who is an actress in my country. Although she suceeds in movies thesedays, she still keep on practising and learnig act. Furthermore, she often skip meals or sleep in order to maintain her fame. There is a phrase that a castle can not be built in one day. That is, it is impossible to be a famous athlete and entertainer all of a sudden. Famous entertainer and athlete have to pour their all energy into their jobs to suceed in their fields. Therefore, famous athletes and entertainers deserve to get high salaries because they need lots of efforts to become famous. All in all, it is fairly enough that famous athletes and entertainers have high salaries, because they offer us pleasure and energy and they definitely need lots of efforts to become famous. People should learn valuabele lessons from famous athletes and entertainers rather than blame high salaries of them.
35분..전 항상 시간이 모자라고 본문을 두개밖에 못써요 쓰다보면 혼자 흥분해서 이것저것 말하고 그러나봐요 첨삭 부탁드립니다^^ |