There are two types of people according to whether people move into another place: those who prefer to move in a new circumstances and those who prefer to live in one place. Although it is true that people living in a limited area need not to feel uncomfortable caused by changes in circumstances due to moving, but I prefer to move into another place for two reasons. In this essay, I will present briefly two reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, Moving into new environment can provide various opportunity for people. By living in a new place, people have to get a new job . People can have a opportunity to better career compared to the old jobs. People can get a new job using careers which is accumulated in the post job or they can get a new job of different field. The former can give people chance to get a better position or merits on looking for jobs. The latter allows people to get new experiences and abilities that they have ever challenged. Besides, new places could be a better place to study. If the place that they were living was not enough for any studies, it will be a chance to concentrate on their study. And there will be a lot of facilities to help people to study effectively. So it is helpful for people both career men or women and students to develop oneself.
Moreover, people can refresh their feelings and make up their mind. People can feel excited when they move into a new house and new circumstances, which make people feel relaxed escaped from the stress from post career or study. Only the fact that they are in a new house can totally make people feel better than before. Futhermore, people can be stimulated by new person. If one person lives in a one place for a long time, he or she will meet only limited people. In this situation, people can be lazy to develop themselves although they can get credits from neighbors because of long stay in the area. Compared to that, if people meet a new person, they know the new person that they are respectful so it can be a motivation to try to do things for themselves.
In conclusion, I prefer to live in different cities. As I mentioned above, not only can people get motivation from new circumstances but also have chances to live in a better environment for studying or working.
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