Topic : Your school has recieved a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
My school has been try to upgrade many facilities. However university's library have not been listed in one of them. Thus, if my school gets a gift of money, It will be used in improving my school's library facility and expanding more library collection. The reason behind this is that students can obtain valuable lessons from books. In addition, it will make them get better grade.
To begin with, students are able to learn life by experincing indirectly. Even though they cannot expereince the story actually, however, they can undergo many fascinating events such as isolated in island , breaking the prison, and loving someone extradordinally. For instance, I can acquire invaluable lesson from the book, "Secret". In this book, the auther explains her expereince after she believes the power of positive. By reading this book, I really believe the power of positive, and I conducted it in my real life. I always think that I can do, and I change my mind and attitude toward hard works. Before the reading book, I alwyas said like this:"NO, I can't do that.". However, now, I say like this: "Yes, of course I can.". As this example shows, the university should invest in libraries and let its students read good books. This will influence its students positively.
On top of that, students also wil get better grade. During the final span, there is always any seat because it is too small. Many students have complained that they cannot find any seat in any time. My freind who attends other colleage is one of the best examples that demonstrate this point. His colleage once had small library too. However, it constructed more libries, and almost every students can study in there. He also studied there, and get literarly great grade. He said that it does not have any distraction and students are motivated to study each other, it is really helpful for students. Thus, university should fund on constructing more libraries to satisfy students who want to find place to study.
On the whole, I strongly believe that university should spend its money on constructing more libraries and expanding its books if it have enough money to do this. This will be praiseworthy decison that excel money to practice this.
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