Some people think that it is better for students to give prize for their achievements. However, I disagree with this statement for two reasons. First, taking prize for efforts is a good chance to enhance students’ self- confidence. Another, student may negatively think about endeavor by being given awards for achievements.
Above all, by giving awards for their trying, teachers can assist their students to feel confident about themselves. In these days, too much workload exhausts students, and sometimes, students are disappointed at their poor grade and experience failure. As a result, they lose confidence. In this point, presenting prize for their efforts make all students who try hard become winner, although they do not come to first. Moreover, students continue to trying as hard as they can, so their performance will be better. For example, when I was high school students, my school gave prize for students who try to do their best. Though my grades were not the best, I could get prize because of my efforts. After that experience, I recharged confidence, tried more and my performance was developed. In this regard, giving prize for efforts is better than for achievements.
Beside, giving awards for only their achievements can lead students to misguide belief of endeavors. If teacher presents a prize to students due to their performance, students do not have incentive to try harder. They think the most important thing is not endeavor but their grade, so they concentrate on achievement only. This gives rise to immoral behavior such as cheating on the test. According to the research, more than 70% of students have some experience to cheating on the test to get prize. As this illustrates, if schools focus more on students achievements, students can miss the key role of trying.
In conclude, I firmly believe that schools should give prize for students’ efforts. This is because students can enhance self- confidence and have a good idea about efforts.
■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Prize for efforts Vs for achievement | |
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Some people think that it is better for students to give prize for their achievements. However, I disagree with this statement for two reasons. First, taking prize for efforts is a good chance to enhance students’ self- confidence. Another, student may negatively think about endeavor by being given awards for achievements.
Above all, by giving awards for their trying, teachers can assist their students to feel confident about themselves. In these days, too much workload exhausts students, and sometimes, students are disappointed at their poor grade and experience failure. As a result, they lose confidence. In this point, presenting prize for their efforts make all students who try hard become winner, although they do not come to first. Moreover, students continue to trying as hard as they can, so their performance will be better. For example, when I was high school students, my school gave prize for students who try to do their best. Though my grades were not the best, I could get prize because of my efforts. After that experience, I recharged confidence, tried more and my performance was developed. In this regard, giving prize for efforts is better than for achievements.
Beside, giving awards for only their achievements can lead students to misguide belief of endeavors. If teacher presents a prize to students due to their performance, students do not have incentive to try harder. They think the most important thing is not endeavor but their grade, so they concentrate on achievement only. This gives rise to immoral behavior such as cheating on the test. According to the research, more than 70% of students have some experience to cheating on the test to get prize. As this illustrates, if schools focus more on students achievements, students can miss the key role of trying.
In conclude, I firmly believe that schools should give prize for students’ efforts. This is because students can enhance self- confidence and have a good idea about efforts.
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