Those who love their faimily too much might say that it is more essential to spend time with their family. However, I think that spending more time at work is desirable for two reasons: to financially support family and to be a role model for their kids.
To begin with, spending more time at work is appropriate for parents to make a ways (x) to support their family. In a sense, it is true that people are no longer motivated by money as their PCI (per caita income) continue to increase. However, you can not deny that this truth is only for few members of upper class who already have excessive properties. Most people should work hard to survive in a materialistic sociey. Nothing is more important than making money a lot because it allows people not only to support their children but also to ensure comportable comfortable life after retirement. By society is getting complex, the competition is getting fiercer. Therefore, the role of parents has been changed. Before It was to play with thier children and give them practical education, educating, but now it is to financilly support them so that they can learn specialized knowledge in educational institutions. Nowadays money is essencial to maintain family.
In addition, as far as the education of children is concerned, it is better to work hard, rather than, just being with them. if you are the child kids, which type of parents would you like? The parents who be always with kids without job or the one successful as a leader in a specific fields field. 보통 이런질문은 확답을 유도해내야 합니다. Kids might want parents only to be with them when kids are very young. However, as kids are growing up, it is the high status of thier parents in society that childeren are proud of. From teaching their kids about how to be successful in a competitive society to becoming a role model, having a successful in a work feild is the most important.
In summary, I agree with the statement that spnding more time at work is more advisable than being with thier kids becuase this acting allows them to financially support their kids and to be educational for their children.
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