이번 9월 18일 독립형 라이팅 주제를 어떤 분께서 올리셨길래 (감사^^)
써보았어요. 이거 다 쓰는데 딱 25분 걸리고 수정하다가 몇분 초과했네요.
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좋은 리더란 팀웜들이 의사결정과정에 참여하고 있다고 느끼도록 만들기 위해 노력해야 한다.
제가 글자수를 어떻게 세는지를 몰라서요.. 이정도 쓰면 몇자정도 나오는건지 말씀좀 해주세요 ㅠㅠ 이번이 첫 시험이라-_- 토플 시험장에 가면 첨에 뭘 하는지도 모릅니다 하하;;
Some people may argue whether a good leader must encourage members of a group to speak their own opinions or not. Some think that good leaders don’t need to do that because some people don’t like being involved. However, I have a different opinion. I believe a good leader should convince members to think they’re participating in making the group’s goal. Let me illustrate my point of view below.
To begin with, it’s needed for a leader to keep his group. Putting it differently, if he keeps making his own decision without any piece of advice, people in the group will think they are no longer a part of the group. For example, there are many assignments which are based on team projects. According to a research made by a student group of my college, “what kind of leader was the best for you?” was the topic, the most students said that the best one was a skilled communicator who was leading a group with efficient communication. Thus, I maintain a good leader should keep communicating with his members.
In addition, a leader who doesn’t share his though might make a wrong decision. I have a good example supporting my idea greatly. I was a youth member of an organization. There was a strongly passionate person who was willing to be the leader. We picked him as a leader. However, He was so passionate that he didn’t want to change his way. People in the group could no longer endure his way because they thought he’s so selfish. As you expected, the group couldn’t last for a long time since if there’s no citizen, there’s no country. Therefore, I believe a good leader should listen to his members.
I have come to a conclusion that a goon leader should keep it in his mind that he has to make people think they are a part of the group. For those two reasons, I strongly maintain it is one of important skills for being a great leader.