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Nowadays, the idea that all students should study at schools has been changed in the US. It means that the schools are not anymore the only educational institution. Not only are many people disappointed in formal education, but also various alternative educational methods have appeared like learning on the internet. Although it has appeared for a short time, homeschooling, also has received a lot of interest from public because a few people succeed with home schooling. However, there are many homeschooling disadvantages about public's view, personality, and habits.
-> Homeschooling has received a lot of attention because it is hard to succeed?
The first disadvantage is public's view about-> stereotype of homeschooler. A few students have desired a new type of school and wanted to study at their house, because they could neither easily adapt their school-> adapt to their school nor make friends. These people usually think only about their selves-> themselves and do not have self-confidence in their lives. In public's opinion, homeschoolers have not gotten to cooperate and interact with other students and they need more patience(why?) and social skill. It means they are not sociable people and almost all of people do not want to work with them in their company.
-> public's view인지 자신의 의견인지 확실히 구분을 지어주어야 할것 같습니다. These people usually think of themselves. 했다가 In public's opinion, 했다가 합니다.
Secondly, homeschoolers are not as creative as other school children. Homeschoolers insist schools prevent having creative ideas and schools make every student have the same ideas. -> students from having creative ideas of their own. Actually, schools do not prevent having creative ideas, but encourage students to have creative ideas. (how are schools encouraging student's creativity?) In school when students discuss with friends, they exchange their creative ideas and confirm their ideas with teachers or professors. It obviously helps students become creative people. But, homeschoolers do not have opportunities to exchange their idea, moreover they just keep ideas in their brain. Obviously, that behavior is so foolish because they do not even know their ideas is creative or not.
On top of that, homeschooling would make students lazy. Homeschoolers say it is advantage that students do not have to get up at the same time in every morning and homeschooling can make a lot of free time-> that they have a lot of free time. But this is not always good. Most organizations require people go to work at early morning. So, people need to have a habit to get up-> a habit of getting up at the same time in every morning.-> every morning We should not forget that getting up late is a bad habit and breaking of bad habits is very difficult.-> breaking it is difficult.
-> 별 뒷받침내용 없이 단정적이고 극단적인 내용들이네요. 좀 완화시키시고 더 논리적으로 쓰시면 좋겠습니다.
Conclusively, some parents have complaints about schooling programs and they start to teach their children in home. But more than 50% of them failed to study in their house because of these reasons I mentioned. We should not forget there are more people who failed on homeschooling than schooling people, and successful homeschoolers are just few people. Studying with many friends in school has been good way to make children social people since a long time ago and will have become excellent educational method.