■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Your Answer :
It is often said that with the help of the Internet, students can learn more effectively and I firmly agree with that. Internet itself is food of information. In rapidly changinn this rapidly changing world, new data or issues occurs overnight. Moreover, specialists are not able to know accurately 100 percant about their field of study. Some people may be oppose to my view because the internet is difficult to select the information they needed.it is difficult to select information from internet.
To begin with, we can quickly find a substantial amount of information quickly. Not only that, we also broaden our knowlege by using internet just in a second. Although there are plenty of books included including more profound data in libraries, it takes too much time to seek for informatoin you need exactly. In this sense, using internet is more beneficial to search when searching information. In addition, most of sutdnets use internet to find data related to their assignment for submission.
On top of that, there are a lot of online lectuer available. It can foster one's capacity of understanding the subject in detail and first and foremost, it cost less than take classes in academy. After school, teachers are busy handling school works in these days. To ask the problems to their teacher directly is a good way, but taking online lecture is more effective way in instant feedback. Also, we are able to choose appropriate grade of the online lecture options to compensate our knowlege or enhance it. From my experience, I was not able to apprehend the science matters following and contentrating only in our school. So,Therefore(So를 문장 시작할때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) I took an online lecture about on science and realized I was poor at basic grounding. After that, I spur to catch the class and got a good grade.
To summurize, I absolutely agree with that the statement that students can learn more effectively by using the internet. We are able to see the internet users here and there eascily.easily. Furthermore, the birth of smart phone makes us contact internet more simply. All thigs considered, most of all cannot avoid using internet.
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딱 300자...ㄷㄷㄷ.... 계속 내용에 집중을 더 해야될거같네여ㅠㅠ
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