Education is the focal point of most deliberable in the modern society, and any arguement or dispute about it would indeed smack into headlines. Regarding this issue, while some people believe that students should focus on major subject for thier specialities, others think otherwise. In my opinion, the latter content sounds more reasonable. With intensive consideration, numerous bases are divulged to support the claim.
One very prevailing assertion is that students are enable to get more balanced mind while taking assorted classes. In these days, emphasizing creative, broader knowledge will help them generate more creative thoughts. Someone that who focus on only a few subject in learing tend to recognize and solve the problem with their narrow viewpoint. However, other students in opposite side have capacity to look into the problem with in-depth. Indeed, it would be a proof that my some of my collegues who have learnt in a variety of fields tend to solve the problems more creatively.
An additional contention that caused me to favor this side is that as students learn about many subjects, they are easily able to find out what they are more interested in and where their talent is.The faster one develops his or her best ability, the higher he or she succeed in that field. For example, my friend has found his talent in art when he was five year old while trying many subjects before entering school. Due to this reason, he was able to develop the ability in painting and grown up as a famous designer.
Consequetly, if we prudently reflect on it, it is not taxing to assume : student should try to get oppotunities to take in many areas of classes to get more creativity and to find out their talent as soon as possible.
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