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Growing up, I often heard from my parents that I should neat my room, lest I live an unsuccesful life. I am sure that many people have similar experiences. However, I realize that my parents was wrong.; this being the case, I also want to argue that there are no relevance between success and organized their own rooms. First, neating and organizing the room is no more than a habit. In addition, people whose do not organize and neat their room might be have more superior to other abilities.
To start, good organizing their room is just a habit. At first glance, It may seems that there are more incentive to people whose good at organize their room. However, it is a widely accepted view that organizing is not more than a good habit; I agree with this view from personal experience. For example, my second year of college comes to mind. In that year, I have a friend who has a habit that organize her room. Although my friend had a good habit, she suffered from getting a job and making other friends. Therefore, organizing and neating their room is no more than a habit and it doesn't effect their success.
In addition, people whose have not neat their room might be have other great abilities or habits, not organizing. It cannot be said that every people whose have dirty room are more smart and valuable than people whose not. However, what is true is that all of the people have a lot of abilities respectively. For example, I have read an article about survey of the Korean Times. In the survey, people, whose live successful life, were asked what the habit is good for your success. Of those who answered, 86% of people said that writing something everytime and everywhere. When asked to explain, they stated that when they was young, they were organized their room, but it doesn't relevant their success. This example demonstrates that people whose rooms are organized and neat are not always success.
To conclude, people whose rooms are organized and neat are thought of as living successful lives than people whose not. However, I want to argue that there are no relevance between organized room and success. Not only just a habit, but also people have a lots of other abilities while they don't organize their room.
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