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It is often said that one should not make an important decision alone. Some people might disagree with this statement because the one is the person who is directly involved in the situation. However, I strongly support that a person has to decide important things with others. This is because other people provide valuable information, and they are more objective.
To begin with, advice from other people offers essential information which has to be considered. There is a saying that two heads are better than one. This indicates that a person can reduce mistakes and learn something through others' experience or knowledge. For example, when I was a freshman in college, I was going to buy a car. Since I made the money very hard, I really wanted to make a wise decision, and I was considering between two cars. The appearance and costs of those two cars were the almost same, and I could not have decided which one was better. Thus, I asked advice to my father, and he told me to compare the fuel efficiency of the cars. Also, one of my friends who had the car which I considered told me that the car was easily broken down. For the important information, I chose the car with high mileage and durability.
In addition, the third party has more objective view. It is obvious that one who is directly involved in problem is highly likely to be emotional. Therefore, he or she easily made a wrong decision. For instance, Ho Jung, my brother, fell in the love few years ago, and he was seriouly planning to get marriaged with the girl. However, she was not a good woman actually. She lied a lot, had no respect to others, and was reckless in life. Since my brother loved her, he did not be able to notice these negative aspects of her. However, his friends persuaded him to realize these facts and to break up with her. If there had not been that critical advice, he would have suffered from a wrong decision.
In brief, I firmly believe that a person should ask others' opinion when he or she makes a crucial decision. This is because it provides more information and unbiased views. When we are faced with difiicult problems which require a wise decision, there is no reason why we have to suffer alone without valuable advice.
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