제가 토플시험보기전.. 어느정도 써야 어느정도 나온다 감이안잡혀서 공부하는데 어려움이 많았었거든요... 혹시 그런분들 많으실까봐.. 제수준의 글과 점수 올려드립니다. 저는 이번시험에서 통합형 fair 독립형 fair받았구요.. 총점수는 22점이였구요.. 독립형 나름 열씸히 썼는데..good받기 정말 힘드네요..ㅜ.ㅠ 통합형은 바디 3개중에 1개를 완전 미스하는바람에 바디한개는 리딩지문의것만 썼구요..이런것 고려해서.. 대중 생각해주심 될것같네요.. 이 에세이는 시험보기 전날 마지막으로 썼던거구.. 제생각엔 시험볼때로 이정도로 썼었던것 같아요.. 그냥 자신의 점수대가 궁금하신분들 이거보시구 대충 감잡으셔보시라고 올립니다. |
=>whether television programs should be educational or not When it comes to the question “whether television programs should be educational or not” it is very valuable topic to discuss. Some people might say that television programs should have educational aspects. They want to get various kind of information from the television programs. In opposition to this opinion, I believe that television program should be entertaining. The reason behind this is that television not only makes us relaxed but also gets family together without difficulty. To begin with, interesting programs beneficial for people who want to take relax. Entertainment programs provide the best way to relieve the stress. When I was in high school, I always feel exhausted because I could prepare the university entrance exam. If I feel fatigue, I came out to the living room and watched television. After watching television, I feel refreshment and I could more concentrate to my study. Judging from my personal experience, television program should be enjoyable for people who want to relax. Secondly, entertainment programs have lot of benefit to make family relationship more strongly. In busy contemporary society, many family members do not have enough time for staying together. As a result, almost people can not converse with each family member. For instant, my family members always try to eat dinner together for getting together. However, we could not talk a lot because we did not have in common. When we started talk about entertainment program which is my entire family member was interested in, we could talk a lot and laugh together. In this view point, entertainment is the most important role of the television program. To sum up, I strongly believe that television program should provide us entertainment. The rationale behind this is that enjoyable television programs are both have benefit for people to take relax and make family bond firm. In these reasons, I also argue that entertainment is the basic function of television program. |