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When it comes to the question "whether famous athletes and entertainers deserve high salaries or not" it is very valuable debate to discuss. Some people say they don't deserve high salaries, saying that it is a waste of money. In opposition to this opinion, I strongly argue that they deserve such high salaries. The reason behind this is that they not only give us energy but also work hard as thier jobs.
To begin with, the famous athletes and entertainers give happiness to us by performing well. When they conduct nice things through TV, such as soccer games, most people become happy as citizens. To illustrate, the World Cup in 2002 held in Korea and Japan, Korean soccer players performed well by winning other countries. So many Korean citizens became happy and spent reliable time during the period. In this view point, they deserve to get high salaries.
On top of that, they also work hard like normal workers on society. We don't look up to them because they are just athletes or comedians. But that kind of jobs need more patient than other jobs. Because they have to run every day. Moreover, they don't have time to relax at home. For instance, when I was an elementary school student, I was good at playing soccer. So I joined kids' soccer club. But after I got lessons which made us train every day, I skipped the club because I was so tired and became lazy. Judging from my personal experience, they also spend hard days by training like us.
To sum up, I strongly insist that the athletes and entertainers deserve to be high-paying jobs. The rationale behind this is that they give us reliable energy by showing nice performance through TV as well as they also work a lot, unlike we think of them. For these reasons, they really deserve high salaries. |