Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A minimum number of physical education credits should be required for graducation from college.
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There is an ongoing debate on whether college curriculum should be more focused on academic studies by making physical education subject elective. Some people agree with this statement saying that physical education does not help students get their job after graduation. In opposition to this point, I strongly argue that physical education is one of the most important subjects and thus should be mandatory for the following two reasons: an opportunity to enhance one’s physical strength and an easy way to learn social skill. To begin with, most of the college students put more emphasis on their study than on their physical status. This leads to an unbalance between their physical status and intellectual one. Since they spend a short period of time raising their physical strength, they become unhealthy and weak, feeling exhausted and sick more often when they study. Ironically, their intention to prolong their study time by reducing physical activities time results in shorter time and less concentration. For example, when I was a freshman in high school, I was one of top 5 students in school although I was not the best student in grade. After thinking about the reason why I could not be the best student for days, I concluded that he not only studied but also participated in sports at physical education. It was not until I put my conclusion into practice that I became the top student in school. Judging from my experience, it is obvious that physical education revitalize students to study even harder. On top of that, that physical education class is a chance to learn social skill is another advantage of that class. Campus life accompanies heavy load of studying, thus students cannot help being stressed out. It is the social relationship that helps students get out of the stress and ready to study again. If they do not form social relation with others for years, they are likely to be depressed. To have a social relationship, taking physical education class is one way. As they play any kind of sport, especially team sports, they have to communicate with teammates to win. After an exciting match, they are likely to become friends. In this respect, playing sports in physical education class gives the benefit to study harder. To sum up, I strongly argue that college students should take physical education class. This is because they provide students with many benefits including enhancement of their physical ability and extension of social relationship.
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