because people are so busy doing many things they do only few things well.
다시 한번 보니까 약간 주제를 빗나간거 갔다는 생각이;;;;;; 문장 수준이 낮긴 해도 라이팅 한개 외우고 써보니 확실히 잘 써지긴 하는군요....... 아직 갈길이 멀었다는 대략적인 점수와 평가 부탁드립니다. |
As agriculture society had changed to information society, people are living in more complex world. According to this issue, there are some arguments regarding whether today’s people can focus on a few things from their busy life. I disagree with the above statement for the following two reasons. First, people rather can many various things thanks to the Internet. Second, people can spend their time more economically due to many products. To begin with, people work a variety of things in a given times because of the introduction of the Internet. In the past, it was impossible that people labor various things in the same time. At that time, work patterns were more simple than today. They worked alone or worked together only in person. Now things have changed. As many techniques are getting brilliant, the quality of working has been increased. It means that people can deal with more workload. Most of all, the development of the Internet made possible to work more convenience. Since 1990s, the Internet has been connected world-widely, many companies could expert and import with other oversea corporations. They no longer went to company trading in person, exchanged information through E-mail or telephone. It was efficient in a financial aspect and in saving time. This shows that with the help of the Internet, people can many things in more convenient circumstance. In addition, people have more spare time to use for themselves with organized instruments. Most elders used to help their parents farming when they were youngster. So they didn’t have enough time for themselves. As time went by, as many items have been introduced, it is possible to do many things systemically. Let me take my case as an example. When I entered high school, my mom bought for me a schedule planner as a present. It was very useful for me having distracted personality. I lived the way written on a planner, my grade was getting higher more and more. Finally, I could enter well-known university I wish to go. In this sense many products enable people to take care of many things. To sum up, I disagree that today’s people cannot work many things due to their hectic life for the reasons that mentioned above. First, the Internet made working-condition better. Second, many products help people work effectively.
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