TOPIC : Today's people spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do rather than they should do. do you agree or disagree?
All of people want to spend time to watch time and eat food and sleep in all day. But it is just for 1% of all people, who are rich. So other people have to effort to use time efficiently. Because they have to survive in this complex society. So they are busy and they want to upgrade themself.
Modern people are so busy. Old poeple had more enough time than modern people. Because old age is not detailed and not complexed. So they were not competitive than now one. But modern age is changing fastly. Modern people are living very swiftly to adopt modern society. So they dont have enough time to spend the time for their fun. I was suprised in last family meeting. Because my young cousin, 9 years old, take 4 academic, taekwondo, Piano lesson, Math, English. More suprised thing is that there is student who take more academic. When i was young i spended time to play basketball and watch TV. But they dont have any time to enjoy this. You can magine how adult would be busy. They get just deficient time to spend for their fun
Secondly, modern people like to invest time to upgrade themself. Spending time for their interest could be meaningful because of getting rid of stress of them. But modern people like to improve themself. From having various knowledge like art, economic to excersing everyday, they do something to help themself. Actually, these activities make them successful. For example, at freshmen my credit was so bad. I were so hard to focus on studying. So i started to do jogging. And i experienced that I could focus on studying well and my credit was upgrading. I want to be a exellent person. So i always effort to use time efficiently. And all of people would be same with me. They dont have time to waste. They just try to upgrade themself in most of time.
Modern people are so busy and modern society is competitive. So modern people have to use time
efficiently. i agree that all of people want to have enjoy time for them. But it is impossible in modern society
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