■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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It is often said that television has not destroyed communication among friends and family because television offers enjoyable time to spend with family and friend. However, I believe that television has a negative effect on communication among friends and family for two reasons: People spend most of their time watching TV and learn violent language from TV
To begin with, TV deprives people of communication time with their family and friend. This is because the lure of TV programs causes young people to spend much time watching TV. Thus, they have less communication time with family and friends, leading to the point where they only focus on watching TV. According to the Ministry of Education of Korea in 2007, unlike the past, young people hardly spent their time families and friends because television brainwashed young people to spend most of their time through the characters` behaviors which looked cool to young people This implies that there was a decrease in communication time among friends and families because of TV.
On top of that, TV teaches people violent language. It is obvious that continuous exposure to violent TV programs cause people to be desensitized regarding violent language. In addition, people are easily influenced by a good-looking characters` violent language, which breaks communication. Coming from my personal experience, one of my friends, Min Su, enjoyed watching violent movies, and even imitated the characters` language in a violent movie without realizing it is wrong. He used to talk with their family and friends by using these language learning from TV. As a result, the relationship came to an end because these language upset their friends and family. This shows that when it comes to people`s communication, TV is a bad source
To conclude, TV has a negative influence on communication because it makes people to be violent and prevent people from communicating their friends and family by depriving time | |
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