주제-문제를 해결하기 위해서 자신의 지식과 경험을 사용하는것이 남들에게 조언을 구하는것 보다 나은가?
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이번 에세이는 솔직히 약간 자신있게 썼어요. 주제 보고 어려울 거 같애서 연습할려고 쓴건데;;
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예상점수도 혹시 추측 가능하시다면..... !!!!!!
Many people think that it is better to use their own knowledge and experiences when they encounter a problem. However, I think that they are misguided and there are two reasons why I think this way. By combining advices from others and your own knowledge you can think about the problem in a new point of view. Your worries, problems, and pains can be relieved just by talking to others because it means that you have someone who can understand you.
First of all, your knowledge and experiences are not everything you can use to find a solution. There are many sources of knowledge, and one of them is advices from other people. Some people say that everyone is different so others might not understand you. Yes. We are different from each other. However, that shouldn’t be a drawback for solving a problem, and it should rather be considered as an advantage. Because others are different from you, they would have different aspects about the problem, and one of them can be a good one. Do you know why bosses call a meeting when they have a problem? Because the boss him self’s opinion might not be enough to solve it. He listens to everyone’s ideas, and he chooses the one he thinks is the best solution. Just like this, you can ask others for advices and you can choose the idea you think is the best for you.
Furthermore, you are pretty lucky enough that you have someone who listens to and sympathizes with you when you are asking others for help. If you think about the problem just by yourself, it will stress you out. Just talking about your problem can alleviate your feelings. You would talk to someone else because you innately and unconsciously believe that there is a solution that you are not aware of. And that’s why there is a job such as counselors, after all. They listen to you, and you would be more relaxed since it seems like someone is listening to you even if they can’t give you an advice.
As I mentioned above, using your own experience and knowledge might be insufficient for you to find a proper solution. Also, you will feel better when someone listens to you and sympathizes. Thus, I think that it is better to talk to someone for advice rather than to use my own knowledge and experience.