Some people encourage hawks and other birds of prey to nest on city buildings because they eat mice, rats, and other pests. Other people do not want them nesting on their buildings because their droppings can make a mess. Which point of view do you support? Develop your answer with specific reasons and details.
As far as I am concerned, I would like to support the statement that people do not allow birds to make city a mass mess입니다. Some people claim that hawks and other birds are helpful to eliminate mice, rats, and other pests. However I personally believe that nesting them is no good for us because they definitely make our community a mass and also they usually have a harmful virus.
In my opinion, people should not encourage birds of prey to nest on city buildings because they make city a mass. To say in detail, I can see a group of birds in my front yards of apartment, company ies and roads. Not only make do they make a noisy noise and but also they tear to garbages for to eat eating some food. Furthermore, everyday they excreat excrete dung faeces and urine in the roads. It is no good for external appearance in city//. If it is not clean, many people would not like dislike to come our city to sightseeing sightsee. In addition, According to the Dong-ah daily, every 20 percent of birds in city by accident because of roadkill. (wrong sentence). Actually, two months ago I saw a car which killed a bird. I was really shocked. Even worse, nobody clean the bird. For these reason, I disagree that nesting bird on city enable city to make dirty.
external appearance에 좋지 않다까지 좋습니다. 전개가 무난하게 나가다,
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I believe that nesting birds in a city is no good for human being because they have a lot of virus. A birds expert argues that birds like hawk which is live lives in the city has many germs because of the city pollution. Therefore, If they fly with a flap of the wings on people's head, they shake off many harmful virus to themin your health. The expert said that this kind of virus can cause people to get a cold or allergy. I have a little girl so I really worry about girl's(girl's 하면 딸의의미가아닌 그냥 모르는 여자애의미가 강하므로 her하시면 됩니다) health when I saw see a group of birds in road in my city. 딸이 있는데 새가많이있는 것을 보면 그아이의 걱정을 하게된다라른 개인적인 감정의 갑작스런 표현은 현재 맥락상 맞지 않네요. 딸이 새가 많은곳에서 놀다가 병에 걸려서 알아봤더니 조류독감이어서 심히 걱정을 했었다라는 뭐그런식의 예를 들면 적절하고 뒷받침이 잘 되겠지만 단순히 새를 보면 걱정이된다라는 것은 도움이 되지 않아보입니다. :)
Overall, there is no doubt in my mind is that people should not encourage bird to nest on city even if they eat mice, rats, and other pests because they have unhealthful virus and also they make city a mass. Therefore, If you see a bird in your city, you should avoid them because they have virus which is caused by many kind of pollutions and they may able to excreat their execration in your cloth. |