Many students prefer to attend schools or universities in their home countries because of convenience. If student study in their hometown, they cannot-> they don't have to suffer a language barrier and adaptation of the new environment-> go through the process of adapting to the new environment. However, they cannot have various experiences and meet people from all around world.
Furthermore, they study in the developed education system based on abundant knowledge throughout going abroad.
-> 문장구조자체가 항상 they나 many people, students, I 등으로 시작해야 하는것은 아닙니다. 예를들어 various experiences coming from meeting people all around the world will not be able to come close to them. 처럼 쓸수도 있습니다. 우리나라 표현은, 우리는 뭐했다, 나는 이러하다, 그래서 그들은 이렇게 하였다, 그것은 저러했다. 등의 문장이 나오는 것이 일반적이지만, 영어에서는 주어의 다양성이 더 중요시됩니다. 따라서 좀더 다양한 문장구조를 사용하면 점수를 올리는데에도 도움이 됩니다.
To begin with, students can have a lot of experience and see the-> get in touch with various foreign students who have different backgrounds. When people go abroad to study, they should be adapted to the new environment including the new culture which is different from their own one. Students may think that the world is very big and there are so many things to do. In my personal experience, I decide-> 시제주의 to study in America where having a great education system through the English course in America.-> where 뒤에는 완전한 문장입니다. To improve my knowledge level, I thought I must study in top universities in America. Besides, students can learn different view-> different views about the same factor. The students have grown up in different environments have different thoughts and aspects about the same issues.
In addition, it is very great beneficial-> it is very beneficial students-> beneficial + for studnets to study under the developed education system. Many people go abroad to top universities to improve their knowledge grade. Thought great professor and abundant material to study is very useful to study effectively. Such developed education system is also helpful to construct their knowledge level as well as to get a job after school. For example, a medical center in Yale University has more developed technologies-> 기술이 더 발달해있다는 뜻이 불분명합니다. than Korean universities, and medical labs of the Yale Universities is more developed with the last machine and lab instruments than Korean ones. Therefore, the student can study the developed and last technologies about the biology and medical technologies in the Yale,
In conclusion, I agree the statement that it is better than for students to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Students can experience various culture as well as fluent knowledge based on the developed education system. That is also one part of the career.
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