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We often hear in the news about growing animals is good for children's responsibilities. On the other hand, we also hear about that it is not the best way to foster children responsible is to have them take care of animals. Of the two, I think the later case is more appropriate for our age; this being the case, I also want to argue that growing animals is not the best way for children's responsibilities. First, it is able to not grow children's responsibilities, but make tasks to their parents. In addition, there are lots of more effective ways to grow children responsible.
To start, growing animals can be spend lots of parent's money and time instead of making children responsible. At first glance, it may seems that doing children take care of animals is useful to grow responsible because children have to feed and care about their animals. However, it is a widely accepted view that it is just spend amount of parents' money and make them bother; I agree with this view from personal experience, I taken care about my dog before, but after few weeks ago, my parents responsible the dog. Finally, we were send the dog to my cousin's house. In this sense growing animals is not appropriate one to foster children's responsibilities. For example, my second year of middle school comes to mind. In that year, I wanted to grow the dog and I talked to my parents. They thought that is good for make my responsibility. However, I was just a child so I couldn't care about my dog. Therefore, my parents took care the dog and unavoidable send him to my cousin's house.
In addition, there are a bulk of different ways to grow children's responsibilities. It cannot be said that growing animal is not good for children responsible. However, what is true is that there are more effective ways than growing animals. For example, I have read an article about survey of newspaper called the Korea Times. In the survey, people were asked that what action is the best way to grow their responsibilities. Of those who answered, 78% of people said that
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