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How many people understand the comments of bloomberg television reporter? I believe many people do not understand the true meaning of the reporter's word. Most people only notice that the comment imply implies the direction of the words : positive or negative. However, those who learned economics at the college may have deeper understanding of the word. As this example shows, the education of economics is becoming essential.
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First, economic knowledge is crucial in constructing household's portfolio. Without analyzing current economic status, investment decision of financial product is almost impossible. For each and every financial product is severely complex, distinguishing one from thousands products is too difficult. Most economic indicators which private bankers mention such as industrial production and unemployment rates require knowledge of economics to be understood. At the same time, since life expectancy expanded to almost the age of hundred, necessity of preparing retirement is increasing. Therefore, one should know about financial product and have a strategy of financial gain. And Also(And를 문장 시작할때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) this strategy cannot be set up without the help of knowledge of economics. According to the research of Seoul National University, those who studied economics at the college made far more money compared to people who do not have any knowledge of economics. This result shows the importance of economic education to more people. In this sense, the education of economics is prerequisite for all people in the country.
Second, knowing economics is necessary to be a wise voter. In every election of president of congressman, there are diverse promises regard to economic development. However, we know that some of them are actually not feasible or even harmful to economy in the long run. Without any idea of economics, distinguishing desirable and undesirable policy is impossible. For instance, current South Korea president Myung Bak Lee had a pledge of Seven-Four-Seven. This means seven percents of real Gross Domestic Product increase in each year, fourty thousand dollars Gross National Product(Four Man dollar in Korean), and seventh economic standing in the world. This was highly impossible promise for Korean economy at that time. However, many people voted to him giving credit for his policy. Now, even though South Korea successfully arised from the global financial turmoil, his promise seems to be infeasible. This example shows the importance of economic knowledge to be a wise voter.
Economic education should be expanded into high school. Basic knowledge of economics is essential for planning one's successful life as well as executing a right of citizenship in society. I believe a course of education should be changed as society evolves. This is the time that society calls for change.
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