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Some people disagree with the idea that all teachers have to be educated on latest tendency. However, I strongly believe that educating periodically five years is necessary for all teachers in order to follow today's trend because it is helpful for students to achieve their studies,better education ,can communicate well between students and teachers, and is essential to compete with other country.
First of all, being educated is good for students to achieve their studies. Since the society is highly competitive with thousands of prominent figures that an individual must prevail over, people in the present days make tremendous efforts to be superior to than other. Coming from this competitive atmosphere, it is essential for students to have more efficient skills and conductive education in order to occupy competitive edge. And Also teacher is to convey knowledge to students and a student is to learn it. It means that if a teacher has latest education, his students are instantly influenced on their grades. Thus, a teacher is in duty bound to learn more developing skills, according to trend, to provide student from efficient education. To add, I can give an example of two people. One has same educational skills, not to consider falling behind the trend, and another has been continually educated in the latest trend. Who will be helpful for student? Who will be useful for student to achieve their work? I absolutely think that the later one offers them to achieve better grades. Therefore I think educating the trend is important in aspect of helping students.
Second, not only does it help for students to improve their studies, but also learning in the trend enables teacher to interact well with them. If a teacher be educated in latest trend, the teacher can fully understand that their pupils worry about their studies from trifling to big things?? and can talk them how to deal with the matter. It enables teacher to communicate with students better because of by understanding students' problem. Thus, by learning in the tendency, teacher can communicate better with students.
For these reasons, I absolutely think that teacher should be educated periodically every 5 years.
five year( 100이하의 단위 숫자는 영어로 써주는게 좋아요)
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