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It is often said that to receive advice from same age friends is more valuable than those older friends.
My view, however, is that to receive advice from older friends is more valuable. This is largely because, I can receive more good information about my troubles. Moreover, I have a chance to gain more serious advice.
To begin with, older friends can give a good information about my troubles. It is no secret that older friends have more information by from their experience. So,Therefore(So를 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) they can give more specific and practical advice about troubles to others.
A study reported in the Korea Times shows that the old people such as Dr.ahn are influential role model for young people.
Therefore, it seems clear that older friends can give a good advice to younger friends than those in the same age.
On top of that, I have a chance to gain more serious advice. In many cases, In contrast to their same age friends, the older friends talk about more serious matter with their friends. So,Therefore, older friends can effectively give advice to friends.
For example, I used to receive advice from my same age friends but they often regard my troubles as nothing. But However, my older friends give good advice for to me.
To sum up, to receive advice from older friends is more valuable than from those in the same age. On the grounds of that, I can receive good information about my troubles. Also I have a chance to gain more serious advice by talking with older friends.
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