▶ Your Answer : Some people prefer to study with a group of students because group study can help each other, and provide information. However, in my opinion, due to its since it is unclear that students in the group have enthusiasm on studying. Therefore, it can distract students who really want study. Also, study by alone will build spirit of independence.
To begin with, studying alone will provide better environment that allows students to concentrate on studying. However, supposing that students study with other students, it is evident that not every students want to study really hard. Therefore, not only they distract other students, but also not really helpful. According to the Ministry of Education, they reported that over 60% of students who usually study alone, they perform better at school. This is because students said that they can focus on studying more easily and since nobody bothering bothers them, students could study in the best environment. This implies that most students perform better when they study alone.
On top of that, studying alone play a significant role in development of individual`s independence. To be specific, students often face numerous difficult problems that take them longer time to solve. However, even if the answer was wrong or they could not figure out, while the process students might advance both studying and independence. According to a the research conducted by Seoul National University, researchers mention that students who like to study alone, they fulfilled better at the society. For example, most of students got high-paid jobs and took better position in the society when compare to students who studied with group. Therefore, studying alone relatively have an positive on students` independence, and study.
To sum up, although group study have has positive aspects on students, studying alone comparatively have has more benefits than group studying in two ways. First, it will enable students to focus on studying better, and it will build great independence. In this sense, i prefer to study by myself.
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