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As world is becoming busy and complex, it seems clear that people don't consider their towns important but just care about their lives. However, if I could change one siginifican thing about my hometown, I would change a community center into a comprehensive community cultural center. This is because it helps to improve people's life and also, it is beneficial to my hometown. First of all, a comprehensive community cultural center including a library, a gym and healthcare center makes locals's life improve. This is because there is just a only small library in community center in my town. Therefore a comprehensive commucity center provides a place where locals are able to enjoy reading books and working out freely and spendint time with family and friends. For example, unfortunately, my town consists of apartment and there are a few places for locals to socialize with each other in my town and so a lot of people don't know their neighbors. Especially, there is no place where children can play with their peers. Therefore, if we have a community center for locals, locals can spend time together reading books and talking each other. In addition, it will be beneficial to my town. This is because it gives a positive image to people who live in other city. Other town's people will think that my town is a good place to live and they want to move in my town. Also, my town's people will be proud of their's town and they are not planning to move out. To illustrate, a recent survey shows that more and more people prefer to move to the towns which have well-designed community centers. Since people enjoy past time with their family and friends after work. Moreover, parents feel secure because their children can play and study safely in the community center. Therefore those towns earned more taxes and good images. In conclusion, I strongly believe that a comprehensive community cultural center plays a pivotal role in my town because of improving people's life and giving benefits to town.
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