Some people say that a teacher who is serious and strict is more effective than a teacher who is humorous and easygoing. As far as i am concerned, however, humorous and easy going teacher is better more effective (질문 바꾸지 마...)than serious and strict teacher for the following two reasons. First, humorous and easygoing teacher makes students more flexible and relaxed for teaching.about study. Second, this type of a teacher eventually leads students to highly cooperative class environment. ???
First of all, a teacher who has a sense of humor and kindness it is more effective because of providing students with flexible and relaxed environments. gives flexible and relaxed learning environments to students. It is obvious that people generally discover their potential in the comfortable and relaxed environment rather than highly rigid ones. (배경 한 줄 없이 이해하라는 것, 무엇이 명백한데? 오히려 rigid한 교육 환경이 필요한 나라도 있습니다. 가르치는 데 왜 humorous한 게 필요한 사회인지 구체적으로 적어 주세요...) It is also true for students who are especially in the stage of discovering their learning potential. On the contrary in the rigid learning environment due to strict teacher's way of teaching, students can not study well and fully concentrate on study because they are afraid of teacher. 이것도 이상합니다. rigid한 환경에서 공부를 잘 하는 사회도 있습니다. 만약 그걸 동의하지 않는다면 왜 rigid한 환경에서는 공부를 할 수 없는지, 오히려 못 사는 사회에서는 rigid한 환경에서 집중할 수 있는 사회도 있습니다. 우리나라처럼요. 그러니까 왜 rigid한 환경이 집중을 할 수 없는지, 배경을 넣어 주세요. Let me take my experience as an example. When i was in elementary school, a math teacher was so strict about students. He was famous for not accepting any mistakes in solving simple math questions. At that time, i was fairly not good at Math, especially at calculation because it was still confusing to me. (자기 배경 이러한 한 줄로 해결하려고 하는데, 설득력 있는 에세이를 쓰려면, 여러 줄로 내 배경을 이해 시킨 다음에 예를 적는 게 좋아요. 배경을 너무 날로 먹네...)One day in a math class, the teacher called me and asked me to solve one simple plus calculation in the board. As soon as he called my name, i was frigid and my brain became blank because i felt i would write wrong answer . on the board. I went closer to the board and began to write the answer as shaking by hands. As i expected, my answer was wrong and the teacher started to rebuke me. I was so humiliated standing in front of all my classmates even though it was small mistake. Then, i began to hate Mathematics. If the math teacher were easygoing, I would have interests in the mathematics. 자... 예도 다시 쓰세요... 너무 한국식으로 표현하다 보니까, 자꾸 문법만 보게 되요... 제가 이거 읽으면서 얼마나 사전을 뒤졌는지 아세요? 자.. 내용이 이해가 안 되면, 계속 쓸 데 없는 거에 신경 쓰게 됩니다. 제발 질문에 답하는 예를 적어주세요. 배경이 탄탄해야 좋은 예가 나옵니다. 이런 이상한 예 대신요.
Second af all, easygoing and humorous teacher is better for enhancing interaction between students and teachers.(good reason) -> it (easay going and humorous teacher) is more effective because of enhancing interaction. (very good reason) As a matter of fact, students usually feel easy to approach and talk with easygoing and humorous teacher. By doing so, students feel free to ask something to teacher. Plus, It is also good for teachers because in this friendly environment, students are more willing to help and cooperate class matters with teachers. Some people might say that if teachers are too easygoing, students will neglect what teachers teach and say about them. 뭐야?, 이런 건 자기 주관이 없을 때나 쓰는 거야. 왜 배경 없이 써서 책임 못 지니까 반대 이야기를 내 뱉어? 반대 이야기와 비교할려면 적어도 적절한 배경과 거기에 대한 비교를 통해 효과적이라는 것을 보여 줘야지, 이렇게 하는 건... 에세이가 아니야... However, if teachers draw clear line that what is considered right and wrong, students will follow that line in order to keep this friendly class environment.
두번 째 본문은 아무 내용도 없네요. enhancing에 대해서 설명도 안 했고, 그래서 효과적이라는 것까지 서포트가 되어야 점수 얻죠. enhance도 설명 안 했고, 단계는 enhance -> more effective than ~까지 설명해야 good 나오죠. 배경 설명을 어떻게 하느냐에 따라도 다르지만, 주제 문장이 좋아야 배경도 좋은 배경이 나오고 예도 가치 잘 따라 나온 다는 거 언제나 잊지 마셔야 겠죠. 영어는 두괄식이기 때문에 주제 문장 제대로 안 써 넣으면, 배경도 생각 안 나고, 예는 더 이상해요. 주제 문장 썼으면 배경 생각하고, 주제 문장 제발 좀 짧게 써... 배경 좋은 배경 한 줄 이상, 두 줄쓰기 연습 하고, 배경이 좋으면 예는 따라 나오는 거니까, 배경만 잘 쓰는 연습 하도록 해요.
In conclusion, I disagree that a teacher who is serious and strict is more effective than a teacher who is humorous and easygoing as I have mentioned above. First, relaxed and flexible environments made by an easygoing and humorous teacher are helpful for students in terms of their learning. Second, cooperative atmosphere in the class can be enhanced by this type of teachers. 수고하세요... |