Many parents try to determine their children's futures. Some argue that the children should make their own choices.
Some people say that parents have to try to determine children's future. However, I strongly think that children should make their own choices for their future. First, children can develop a lot of experience by having diverse choice opportunity. Second, a study reveals that children who have been determined by parents have less social ability comparison to others who have been raised making their own career.
To begin with, it is very important for children to develop their self-discipline and social abilities. It may true that children are immature beings than adults and they should be given protection by parents. However, protection doesn't mean that parents should decide children's career. Children are enhancing their thought or values by doing activities with others and facing many difficulties. One of my experiences can be an example. When I was in elementary school, both of my parents had jobs and I spent most of time playing with my friends. At that time, they put more emphasis on their work than on family life. However, they always encouraged me to determine outdoor activities and I usually played diverse activities ranging from art exhibitions to musicals. I complained that they are busy running a small business day and night even on weekends from time to time. However, my parents always promoted me to have various kinds of experience to develop self-independence not depending on parents. Actually, it helps me to broaden my perspectives toward the world and I can more improve my social skills and not only knowledge, but also about valuable lessons in life such as being responsible little things and how to respect and appreciate differences between people. After graduate elementary school, I felt that I'm recall lucky to have such nice parents. Consequently, I could get more and more confidence and showed enthusiasm varied activities because I made choices in my childhood and it was precious experiences in my life.
Additionally, according to recent study conducted by the Ministry of the Education of the Korean in 2009, children who only have been decided by parents are pressed for time and energy doing academic activities that they don't really like. This means that they felt depression since they act like robot made in their parents having no choices. In addition, they also have a sense of inferiority if they failed having good grades in schools comparison to friends. It reveals that parents can cause children to discourage in their life and have negative influence on them. For these reasons, many education institutes start on their policy with regard to teaching method. Its content is that they encourage students to make their own decision whenever they are laid on choices such as arrangement of chair or wearing their clothes. It is called self-regulated program. The purpose of this education is to develop their creative and spontaneous thoughts. The institutions also said that many countries are also introducing this program to children because teens are resources for national competitiveness.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the statement that children have to make their own decision for their future although they may be immature beings as I have mentioned above because they can improve their experience by having varied choice opportunities and children can develop their decision abilities as well as social abilities if they have their own choices in childhood.
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