■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :It is important to have rules about the types of clothing that people are allowed to wear to school. | |
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Most people have their own ideas whether it is legitimate for student to wear a uniform at school.
Some people might think that uniform is beneficial because it can save money and can reduce competitive emotion about what they wear among adolescent. However, others may say that the effects of taking uniforms are likely to harmful. I concede that wearing speicific cloth at school can be favorable, but its disadvantages far outweight its advantages.
First of all, let's think about the stance of student. When they are in adolescent, they enjoy representing theirselves by hairstyle, shoes, and cloth. So, if schools restrict what to wear, the student might have
rebellion and they might think it is unreasonable order. This way of thinking might affect student badly.
Besides, students need to think creatively because original thinking makes students more intelligent.
Though, uniform dsiturb student's creative thinking since it inhibits the chance of appeal by taking different dress and same clothes could cause students same thought. Therefore, we can say that wearing uniform might interrupt student's creative thought.
Next, We can imagine the viewpoint of teachers. Some of teachers are likely to prefer uniform since it is one of the ffective ways of restraining student. But how about think this way? Teachers instruct their students that ' we are live in the place of liberty'. When students heard this statement, they casts doubt on the idea because they are limited what to wear. Subsequently, they might fall in confusion and they could think that 'If our country is liberal, why we cannot choose clothes in school?'. So it is safe to say that restricting what to wear could cause student's confusion since they are in the process of growth.
To sum up, allowing students to wear what they want is very important due to student's creative thinking and their counfusion about the concept of liberty. All things considerd, taking uniform can be beneficial, but its disadvantges far outwight its advantages.
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