Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Since starting the industrialization, we lost important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. All of them are very important components to compose the world. So, it is too difficult to rank the order of them by the value. However, if I have to choose only one natural resource, I might choose the forest, as I concerned my personal experiences as followed;
In the first place, the forest gives us clean air. Even though the air is very important, human being always forgets that we couldn’t survive any second without air, because we can use the abundant air freely. But if you stop your breath for one minute, you realize the value of the air easily. In my case, I work in the subway company so I spend my working hours in underground. Of course, the system of ventilation is pretty good, but there is limitation to use same quality of the fresh air like outside. So I prefer to climb the mountain, whenever I have spare time. As I take a deep breath in the forest, I refresh my body and feel the thankfulness about the air. Therefore, I don't want to lose this precious natural resource, which gives us the fresh air.
In the second place, the forest is the place to live for animals. When I was young there were large forests around us. So I could go there anytime, then I could see many kinds of animals in the forest. However the industrialization has changed everything. The forest is decreased drastically, so it is difficult to see animals in the nature. Ironically, we only can see wild animals in an artificial site such as zoos. So, our descendant might not understand the animal live in the forest because they have no chance to see the animals in the nature. Nowadays the government tries to restore the forest to make a place for wild animal. I am very happy to listen that news, because the government become aware the importance of the forest.
In conclusion, as I have stated the above, the forest provides us with fresh air, but also provides animals with an inhabitation site such as a nest. Therefore I think the forest is the most important natural resource to need to be saved.
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