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Opinions might be divided over whether children should prepare for their adult life and future job by doing the part time job or not. People from different walks of life may take different stance on this contentious issue. Personally, I believe that children can get a lot of benefits by doing their part time job and two of those benefits are listed below.
First of all, working doing part-time job can help children to be socialized and get significant social skills in their relationship. These days, since society has become more competitive, young people tend to be personal and lack a skill of relationship with others. In addition, since the range of their relationship is limited to their family and friends, they can not know the methods to make relation to with many kinds of people. In this regard, the part-time job experience is very perfect opportunity, helping them to wide their relation to with others and teaching them how to make relation to with others. According to a the survey conducted by some magazine, 70 percent of surveyed students responded that by working part time job they can get social skill. In addition, the experience enabled them to realize how good relationships with people work in act as a positive way in society, and made them more sociable and outgoing.
In addition, part-time job can help children to prepare their way of future. Sometimes some people say that children should not do any part time work because it deters academic grade and knowledge. However, students rather can get various skills and information to be used in the future by working their jobs that related to their interests. Take my case as an example. When I was in high school, I often had worked part time jobs in the account office in my vacations. Although my job did not require any expert skills or knowledge about the work, I can get a lot of information about the skills and insights that could be utilized in the future. Through part time job experience, I could get clear aim to my job and have motivation to study more hard.
All in all, because of the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that parents should encourage their children to do a part-time job for them.
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