Where did you spend your young? Most of the people would typically answer in the city due to the dramatic industrial development of Korea. As for me, I agree with it for two reasons; to receive qualified educational service and to treat well at emergencies.
To begin with growing at the urban makes it possible for people to study with excellent teachers taking passions to teach well and offering multiple information. The more the materials that students study become complicated like studying the course taught at the next grade, the more the roles of teachers at one's studying become important. This compelling situation forces me to look for some methods to be free from the lack of information, necessary at the modern society such as reading various types of books about the course and taking lessons from qualified teachers. In other words, dwelling in the cities enables people to take high level of educational service practicable only in cities and then to get good grade at the exam like mid-term at school and some tests to attend the university, specifically SAT in the United States, one of the important parts of attending superior university. For example, during the ages of young, I took education at the city. Learning multiple things at one's young are really important since child could accept the new information such as foreign languages and musical tools without restriction. As a result, I took numerous lessons from violin to English so that I would be able to use special skills in the future which were not able at countryside because of the limitation of facilities and teachers. Therefore grasping lessons by residing cities gives chances for people to be taught by testified teachers.
In addition, living at cities caused by working at the companies in the city of their parents deal with being free from the problems easily at emergences. In modern times, cities possess multiple dangerous situations due to the continuance development building instructions and extending roads. As a result, children are likely to exposed at the dangers easily in the whole parts of cities not only near their home but also there playgrounds. To avoid this, it is desirable for me to look for some methods to acquire fast and excellent treatments with the large number of hospitals to save children from accidents and crisis like car accidents and some ills which need immediate treatments. For example, when I was a elementary student, I fell down and my teeth were broken on the way from school. My homeroom teacher and friends carried off me to doctor with worries. Visiting the hospital fast saved me from serious hurts because if I were late just a few minute then I may not be able to use the teeth broken by the flop. With this experience I felt the importance of rapid treatment again and I also paid more attention. Therefore, spending one's life time at cities offer opportunities for people to receive accurate and rapid treatments.
In conclusion, I agree with the following statement. This is because I receive qualified educational service and this is also because I can adapt well at emergencies. I would like to recommend parents to bring up their children at cities.
<외고분비생인데요 이번주 금욜날이 시험이에요~ 내용과 문법 한번만 평가해주세요 폭언을 퍼 부어주셔서 좋습니다ㅜ 빨리쓰면 30분이면 쓰구요 오래쓰면 1시간 걸리는데 외고에서는 500자 주고 1시간 쓰라고 한데요~ 평가부탁요~> |