Being happy with the job is more important than having a high salary. Do you agree or disagree? |
Some people say having a high salary is more important than being happy with the job. They insist that much money can make your life happy. However, I agree that getting a job with which I can enjoy is better for two reasons. First, work efficiency is determined by your emotions. Second, high salary does not always leads to great results of life. First of all, you can improve your work efficiency when you are happy with your job. Generally, high salary makes the worker happy. So, most students try to get a job in big global companies, which give much money, when they graduate from school. Contrary to such expectation, however, not all students are satisfied with those companies. . When you first get in the company which gives high salary, you are happy with the money. So you can work harder than your ability. But you will feel tired day by day as time goes by. And then you want to find a new job which can make you happy when you do your job in your workplace. One of my friends from college entered a famous company, but the workload was too heavy and he could not enjoy himself, finally he changed his job. Second, there are many values which should be considered when you find a job, except salary. Most students consider only salary when they look for a job. However, salary is not the only essential value, but many others should also be considered. For example, which I like, and whether it has a good environment to work in, and where is best work place to improve myself, and so on. To conclude, I agree that getting a job with which I can enjoy is better for the reasons that I mentioned above. First, feeling of happiness can make high efficiency in business. Second, there are many values to consider which are more important than salary when you look for a job. |
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