some people work more effectively during the dya, while other people work much more effectively at night. Discuss which type of person you are. Give reasons and examples to support your response. |
Since there are diverse characteristics exist these days, also various jobs follows too. There are two kinds of job, one is working during day and the other is during night. As I’m a student I prefer to work during daytime, when I study during night I feel exhausted that I can’t keep study next day in school. Therefore work in morning is beneficial to me in many ways, such as, concentrating more, asking for help, and secreting more hormones. Morning is start of my new day when I’m fully energized. So I can concentrate more than night, when I’m really frustrated. By concentrating more, I can able to finish more work faster than night, and rest of time can be used as some thing else for me. Almost every students study during day, because they go to school at morning and start studying. They learn mathematics, science, foreign language and so on. While learning these many subjects I’m sure most of students need help in understanding of doing school work. Because in my case I really need help in many subjects which I felt fully understood. After I was helped from others I usually learn something new that I didn’t know before, so I can get more information about subject that I have been helped by others. In addition you can also make a good relationship with people who helped you before, which will lead you to better school life. Many students of my friends preferred to study during daytime and also from recent survey of students in In short, I’m a high school student, I go to school at morning and as soon as first period starts I study, I stay in school for about more than nine hours, which ends at four o’clock. Therefore students who are same as me should study during morning. As a matter of fact there are a few reasons, such as concentrating more, asking for help, and secreting more hormones. These are the reasons that you can benefit if you study during day time. So try study during day instead of night.
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