it is more important for a teacher to try to help students to gain self-confidence than to teach them specific knowledge. |
School is very important place where many students not only learn many things to need in their life, but also build social network between schoolmates and teachers before they enter social life. There are some arguments whether over teacher’s major role is helping students to gain self-confidence is more important than delivering specific knowledge. Personally, I agree with this abovementioned statement. First, teacher can be a friend with their students by listening their hardships and problems. Second, a student with self-confidence do the best their works without any mistake. The benefits of having self-confidence do not end in high school years. This strong point playes a important role in entering well-known university. Obviously, students having copious academic knowledge achieve social success more easier than those who are not. However, it is almost impossible to obtain good score if students do not have enough factors such as self-confidence and social ability. They do not have someone who talks about their problems, do not have sufficient information to enter university. On the other hand, students who have self-confidence are more easier to deal with any hardships by sharing with their many friends. According to a recent study released by Seoul university which is one of famous Korean university, the admission committee in the university requires many capabilities such as good grade, strong leadership, social ability. they also replied that university students might spend time on group activities such as group experiments and more various club activities. This shows that teacher should make students have a confidence first of all.
이런거 처음 올려봅니다. 그동안 눈팅만 하다가 제 실력이 어느 정도 될까 궁금해서 한번 써봤습니다. 한시간정도 걸렸습니다.... 그리고 결론은 너무 많이 쓰다보니까 쓰지 않앗구요. 평가해 주세요. 20점은 넘을 수 있으려나요??? 그리고 토플시험때 쓰다보면 시간이 모자르는 경우가 생기는데 에쎄이 쓸때 결론쓰는게 중요한가요??? |