■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
Topic : Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. |
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who think people have some difficulties to control themself might say that
television should destroy communication among friends and family. However I am
sure that television has not destroyed the relation between acquaintances, but
even improved their conversation. There are two major reasons; humans' ability
to manage a time efficiently and to get more information for conversation.
First,
we watch TV when we have a spare time. If we have an important schedule, we
couldn't enjoy watching TV. someone say that people who like to watch TV don't
want to be join any social gathering because watching TV is the most easiest
way to spend time and to have fun. However most people can control their time
efficiently, TV is just one kind of fun. When there is no entertainment, some
people could be a TV-holic. However everything has changed. It's very hard to
find news that someone who is TV-holic. In other words, the affection of TV is
limited.
Second,
TV give us many information to be rich our conversation. If there is no TV, our
topic for conversations should be only from our normal life. Our life is a kind
of cycle and also just repeats. So the role of TV is very important. Through TV,
we can get many topics such as a fashion trend, political issues and common sense
for humor. When we have a conversation it should be helpful to Varity our talk.
In conclusion, we can control our leisure time efficiently so the effect
of TV is limited. So TV couldn't destroy communication among friends and family,
but make our conversation rich.
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7/10일 시험 롸이팅 15점.. (다른 점수도 다 극좌절.. )
8/28일 시험 롸이팅 25점 목표.. 힘내자!!
위 롸이팅은 주제 보자마자 30분안에 정신없이 쓰고,,시간외에 오타 좀 수정한 글..
이정도면 17점 예상..^^ 화이팅!!