■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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The lecturer in the listening passage totally contradicts the reading passage's idea that flexible working hours are beneficial to employers, employees, and families by suggesting a study. According the lecturer, this system is not adventageious than expected surprisingly.
To begin with, the lecturer discusses some drawbacks of a flexible working system as employers. Because hours employees work are different, it is harder to have a meeting, work together and complete team project. Therefore, workers can hardly feel a sense of cooperation or teamwork. This point is against the reading passage's view that a flexible working arrangement helps company to increase its productivity.
In addition, the lecture argues that a flexible working system makes employees isolated and unhappy. Their working hours are diverse, and they hardly have a chance to work together and get closer. As a result, their relationship betweent co-workers cannot be strong and fragile. This things hinder workers from being productive and happy. These things object the reading passage's idea that employees would be happy and productive in a flexible working hour system.
Finally, the lecturer asserts that a flesible working hour system makes family members spend less time with together than expected. That's because family members arrive at home in a different time and spend less time gathering together. As the time to be with gets less, the quality of time with family members gets worse. At the end, family members couldn't have strong bond due to the a flexible working arrangement than a fixed one. | |
쭉 써내려가고 첨부터 한번 읽어보고 했더니 20분이 딱 차네요
시간땜시 대충읽어내려갔더니
어디가 틀렸는지 잘 못 찾아내겠네요
제가 문법적 오류를 많이 낸다고 해서 주의하면서 쓰긴했는데
지나가시는 분들 보이면 답글달아주시면 감사하겠습니다.
특히, 저 빨간 글씨 문법에 맞는 문장인가요?
아! 그리고 개인적으로 단어에서 오타 안내려고(단어오타도 점수에 영향을 끼친다고 들어서)
더 지우고 쓰고 했더니 거기서도 시간을 많이 까먹는거같네요
문법적 오류보다는 덜 깎일텐데 그냥 무시하고 correction하는 시간을 더 가지는게 나을까요?