In modern society, the influence of television and movies on young people is great because the time exposed to them is never small. Young people are exposed to them at least 2 hours a day, and it means that they will acquire a lot of knowledges or habits. Some people say that finally,-> eventually it give them a good effect-> it will have positive effect by providing diverse knowledge that they did not experience ever before. However, I do not agree with the main point-> point because although it gives a good information, it has too much sensational subjects.
Beyond ages, people are subjected to television and moives because nowadays they became most common our playing. -> ? Without various subjects from them, we maybe do not continue to make a conversation with others.-> The subjects they bring up or the contents of those medias make up a good conversation topic. Even it's importance of them, I think that as long as children contact them, it will give a bad affects. Television and movies continuously show it's many different kinds of subjects, but it is too harsh for children to accept. It has violent, sexual scenes. It could lead them to have a wrong ideas.-> distorted view or mindset.
Secondly, sometimes, it generates young people to have a wrong-> 자꾸 a 와 복수를 붙이시네요 :) wrong habits by showing peculiar conducts of someone in a program or a movie. Differently in adults,-> ~와는 다르게 라는 표현은 Differently from adults, 라고 쓰지않고 In contrast to adults, Being different from adults, Compared to adults they have less~, 등등으로 사용합니다. they can not distinguish whether it is right or wrong. In this regard, they should be protected from them. For example, some people who have been exposed to wrong information from tv or movies committed a terrible crime. It indicates that it has a negative affect-> effect on children because they are not adults who can discern if what is wrong or not.
To sum up, I think that obviously it has a good influence on children, however it gives serious habits of wrong or bad ideas. -> them wrong information to possess misleading thoughts as they grow up. Because they are not sensible enough to filter it's information, even though it provides lots of advantages, I do not agree with the main point television and movies have a positive affect on young people.
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