▶ Your Answer :
When it comes to the choice Choosing between receive having a long vacation each year and a several short vacations is hard to decide.throughout the year. Some students prefer to get several short vacations because they get bored in receiving a repeatedly education course. However, I definitely agree getting with having a one long vacation. There are two reasons to show why I choice the latter thing.do i prefer latter stance.
First of all, getting a long vacation allows students to travel anywhere they want. Recently many students travel other countries alone after they earn enough money for myself. by themselves. If I receive several short vacations, I don't get a chance to earn money or to travel trip. Also, students neither get a chance to do active club nor study other subjects.
Moreover, students can learn a self-control capacity. Sometimes parents say that students would become lazy and nat not use efficient time.time efficiently. But,However(But을 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) through the long vacation, I can write a planner and adjust sleeping time. Also, I can achieve a goal during the vacation.
In conclusion, both one long vacation and several short vacations have advantages. However the advantage of long vacation is much more important than short vacation. Because Since not only students students not only can travel anywhere but also can do anything and control by myself. increase control ability.
글이 상당히 짧습니다. 예시도 포함되어 있지 않고요. 토플 에세이에선 예시를 상당히 중효하게 여깁니다, 설득력 또한 더 있고요. 담부턴 추가해주세여~~
화이링해여~~ |