이렇게 쓰면 몇점정도 나올까요? 서론-리딩-리스닝-결론 |
Many people believe that traditional medicinal systems can replace allopathic treatments. In this set of material, the lecture casts doubt on the idea provided by the reading passage on this topic. The main idea of the reading passage is that traditional medicinal systems are positive alternatives to allopathic treatments. According to it, traditional medication is holistic to the disease which means it considers even lifestyle of patients. Thus, the reading passage claims that it is more effective than just taking modern medicines. Furthermore, even though traditional medication is slow acting, it is long-lasting which cures chronic illness. Finally, it is safe since there is no side effect. On the contrary, the lecture refutes the reading passage by providing negative points of traditional medicinal system. The lecturer tells us that it is unsafe since it is not based on the science. According to him, it is mostly performed due to faith or old evidence. In addition, the lecture refutes the reading passage by claiming that it has shorter time of studying or practicing compared to the western medicine since it has reemerged recently. There is no regulatory group that sets standard for approved doctors and he warns that doctors may use harmful ingredients. In conclusion, even though there are many advantages of traditional medication mentioned in the reading passage, the lecturer criticizes it for being risky. |