There is an argument concerning whether it is true that grades can not encourage students to learn.
It is true that even thought school execute to show their grades few people can not feel why they have to
study and someone frustrate because of grade; However I believe that grades can inspire students to learn
more. Because grade make to remind people with refresh stimulus. So in this essay I will present briefly
two reasons to support my opinion.
Most of all, showing grades to student will be able to increase student's learning of sense. Specifically,
It can make shocking. For example, when students finished their exam they want to show the grades even
they failed in the exam. And they will get shock and become frustrated. But I'm sure that due to the this shock
, they will gain more motivation and proceed incredibly. Additionally, when I was elementary school student
my school didn't offer students with grades, which is result of blood effort. Subsecuently, that caused me to
locate in chaos, when I entered in middle school. In this reagrd, grades makes me to be study well.
Moreover, students can win for accomplishment from blood sense of rivalry. In particulary, by making
effort for the sake of prime they can survive from incredible rivalry. In fact, life is always in a sense of rivalry
and people want to survive from this dreadful rivalry. Therefore, grades is helpful to survive from this
rivalry and provides students with opportunity to prepare future. In this respect, to show grade enable
to win within many people from obscure future.
As a result, I disagree with opinion that grades can not encourage students to learn. Because of the
reason that I mentioned above : that can give students chance to become a student who study well and
pave the way of survive from future of bloodless rivalry. |