토플이 한달도 남지 않았네요.. 한번도 제대로 에세이 훈련을 한 적이 없어서
막판에 이렇게 꼼수를 쓰려고 합니다. 그래서 템플릿을 그나마 외우려고 하는데요. 첫번째 글은 토플 정규 보라색 라이팅에 있는 모델 에세이 입니다.
두번째는 인터넷에서 어느 분이 에세이 폼을 올려주셨더라구요..
두번째 글이 훨씬 길긴 합니다만,, (왕초보인 저에게 더 유리하지 않나 싶어서..)
첫번째를 외우는게 나을까요, 두번째를 외우는게 나을까요..
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An ongoing debate exists over whether loaning money to friends can damage the friendships or not. Regarding this controversial issue, I strongly support the saying “lend your money and lose your friends.” The reasoning behind my thinking is that the pursuit of money can make people disregard friendships. What’s more, loans from friends are not seriously considered.
It is debatable whether loaning money to friends can damage the friendships. Some people say that friend in need is a friend indeed. However, I disagree with this statement above, I firmly believe that “lend your money and lose your friends.” There are several reasons for my opinion, but two of the most ones are as follows. First, the pursuit of money can make people disregard friendships. Moreover, loans from friends are not seriously considered.