■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Important decisions should not be made without others. | |
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Many people believe that important decisions alone are much better than with others. However, I strongly support the idea that there are always advantages to decide with others. This is because people can get help from other's experience and knowledge. On top of that, they can make objective decisions.
To start with, other's experience and information in the field are able to provide practical assistance to people when they make significant decisions. Decisions based on good understanding of the subject are not likely to wrong. From my personal experience, when buying a car, I asked my friend who knew alot about cars for advice. As he knew about car market these days, he advised me which is the most important when buying a car.Thanks to his advice, I made a wise decision and satisfied with my car.
Furthermore, decisions with others enables people to be objective. Others not involved can give unbiased opinions and are thus able to make people judicious. For example, one of my friends introduced her fiance to my friends before getting married. Her fiance was insolent and didn't seem to love my friend. So all of my friends advised her not to marry him. After she broke with her fiance, everyone thought that was a wise decision, because he had relationship with another girl.
To sum up, serious decisions should be made with others because people can get help from other's experience as well as make objective decisions.
All things considered, there is always a reason why decisions with others are wise. | |
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