■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : ..Parents are the best teachers.. | |
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Those who thought children could learn many
things in the house might say parents are the best teacher. However I think
parents couldn't be the best teacher. There are two major reasons; insufficiency
of the professionalism and not enough time to play with children.
To begin with, parents are not
professional. People who thought teaching children are easy work might say
parents must be the nice teacher. However it's totally wrong idea. Teacher has
to take classes over 4 years. Even if he/she become a teacher, they should be
reeducated to teach efficiently. In other words, teaching skills are not so
easy to learn and being teacher isn’t a soft job. For example, my sister was
taking elementary school course in a university. She didn’t have a free time
even on her vacation. She always takes some classes and joins a teaching program
to be a good teacher.
In addition, there is not enough time to
teach their children. Children spend most of their time at school with friends
and teachers. Moreover, after school, most students take some private class
such as math, music and swimming to develop their ability. So they only can
join together at evening. My friend has two boys. He also worries about
teaching them. He wants to be not only a good teacher but also a nice father.
So he has joined the Good Father Program since his boy had entered elementary
school. However everyday he talks to me that being a good teacher to his
children is the most difficult thing.
In conclusion, it is very difficult for
parents to be the best teacher. Because being a best teacher is required
professionalism. In addition, they don’t have to enough time to give their
children good teaching. | |
7월10일 시험에 라이팅 15점을 받고 좀 좌절스럽더군요.
뭐 공부를 특별히 한 시험은 아니었지만,,
그래도 이정도로 낮게 나올 줄은.. ㅜㅜ
어떤 분이 좌절할 시간에 해커스라이팅 게시판에 매일 하나씩 올려라 하시더군요..
직장다니면서 독학하기로 맘 먹었으니 해커스게시판을 제대로 이용해야 할 것 같습니다.
8월28일날 시험 또 볼 건데,, 그 때까지 안빼먹고 매일 매일 글 올려보겠습니다..
다른 분들도 열공하셔서 좋은 결과 있으시길..
위 에세이는 빈출 토픽에서 선택하고,,
일단 30분안에 글 써보고,, 10분동안 수정한 겁니다..
한달동안 30분안에 글쓰고 수정할 수 있는 능력이 키워질런지 ㅡㅡ;;