■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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Some people say that athletes and entertainers get too much money. After more reflections, however, it is evident that they are surely deserved to get paid several millions of money. The main reasons are as follows; the high salaries are a result of their arduous efforts as well as they make the image of a country better.
To begin with, their high salaries are the consequence of their a bunch of plenty of efforts. Athletes and entertainers have been making a lot of efforts to achieve their dreams and they finally get paid for their efforts by money. One person who exemplifies this idea is Rain, a Korean male singer. Even though he was poor in childhood, he has been industrious to make his dream come true since he got to have a dream of being a famous singer. He has practiced singing and dancing all day for 7 years. As a result, his dream came true, and I believe that he is deserved to be praised and receive a huge amount of money at a price of his ceaseless efforts. Not only him(or he?), many entertainers and athletes have made a great deal of effort to achieve their goals. Therefore, they are eligible to get high salaries.
In addition, athletes and famous stars play a pivotal role in making an image of the country better. It is significant for a country to have a good image. In industry or other diverse fields, the country's image affects such as increase the rate of export and the rate of purchasing products made in the country. No matter how a country tries to change its image by advertisements, it is not easy and requires a substantial amount of money. However, it could be achieved effortlessly when a movie star and singers are famous over the world or a soccer player made an amazing goal in world cup games. Its economical effect is splendid. According an article, after Kim Yun-a, Korean figure skater, won the gold medal in the 2010 Olympic games, Korea's image was significantly improved and economical effect through its modification was great. Accordingly, I believe that athletes and entertainers are deserved to get a bunch of money thanks to developing the country's image.
To sum up, I strongly agree with the statement that athletes and entertainers are deserved high salaries. That's because they not only have been trying to achieve their goals, but also make the country's image improve. Those people who get high salaries also donate some parts of their payment, and we cannot blame them because they earn a lot of money. | |
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