Most people have their own ideas whether it is more interesting to see a movie in a theater or in at (in 또는 at 둘중 하나를 사용하시던지 하셔야 합니다 :) their home. Some people might think that watching a movie in theater is more funny fun because of its well-prepared facilities. However, others might think that appreciating a movie in at home is more attractive because home makes people feel comfortable. I firmly believe that wathching a movie in theater far outweight seeing a movie in at home for several reasons.
First of all, let's assume the situation that watching a movie with others in movie theather.
여기서 전개방식을, 예를들며 비교해보는 방식으로 정하셨으면 body2에서는 이런 문장이 나올 것이 채점관으로서는 기대되겠죠. (Next, we can imagine ourselves watching a movie at home. ~~~) 그런데 보니 그런것 같지 않으므로 progression/development에서 오히려 감점을 받으실 수 있습니다.
차라리 body1 내용을 암시/요약하는 문장이 이자리에 오는 클래식한 형태로 가는 것이 나았겠죠.
만일 예를 드는 방식으로 전개를 하셨다면 진부한 템플릿에서 벗어났다는 면에서 좋은 인상을 심으실 수 있으셨을 겁니다. 제말이 이해가 가실런지 -_-ㅋ
Although making a noise is limited in the place, we can talk quietly with each other about the contents of the flim. For instance, I have seen the movie, 'inception', with my a friend recently. Unfortunately, I have difficulty understanding the story of it. So, I questioned to my friend, could get answer immediately, and could fully concentrated on the movie. Also, we talked to each other about actors and OSTs, and this makes more funny to watch a flim. For this reason, we can say that seeing a movie with other people in theater is more interesting. (이 내용은 theater 에만 한정되는 내용이 아닌듯 싶습니다.)
Futhermore, cinema houses give a lot of advantages for the purpose of appreciating a film. Today, there are many 3D movies, and the ' Avatar ' is one of the most famous 3D flim. We can take the 3D movies in at home without required equipment like glasses, sound sytem, and wide screen. However, these devices make people more funny (funny라는 표현은 일반적인 즐거움, 재미를 얘기한다기 보다는 , 웃기다 (코메디의 뉘앙스로) 라는 뜻입니다.) when they watch a movie. To illustrate, according to the research done by Korean times, more than eighty percent of movie fans said that watching a movie with in a well-equipped equipment theater is more intersting than seeing a flim in at home. Thus, atmosphere of theater also give people more fun. Accordingly, watching a movie with others in theater is more funny.
아무리 예를 만들어도 좋다고 하지만, 수천개의 에세이를 읽는 채점관들에게 according to National Research Center, Seould National University, Korea Times, Ministry of ~~, KBS 등의 매번 사용되는 진부한 기관에서 나온 조사자료는 의심의 눈초리로 보게 됩니다. 그래서 특히 이런 예를 들때는 조심해야 합니다. 티가 날만하게 자료를 제시하는 것은 좋지 않습니다 :)
To sum up, watching a movie in theater is more funny than seeing a flim in at home. All things considered, I can definitely say that the advantanges of watching in cinema far outweight those of seeing in at home.
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